Optional Homework Assignment
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- Do not accept the partial CEU certificate today.
- Complete the homework assignment listed below by May 5, 2012.
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Homework Assignment
Spend some time reflecting on your experience at the conference and try out an idea in your classroom. Post your reflection on the UNCC Charlotte Writing Project Connect Site. Below are the specific directions. Please contact Lacy Manship at lamanshi@uncc.edu with any questions.
- Go to connect.nwp.org/unc-charlotte-writing-project
- Sign in or Register in the upper right hand corner.
- Click on the Spring 2012 page from the left menu.
- Click on the Conference Homework Forum discussion.
- Scroll to the bottom to the text box labeled “Post New Response”
- Type your reflection into the box and click “Save.”
- Respond to at least one other person in the discussion.
Responses
I really enjoyed the "Three Word Essay" introduced to me at the conference. It is a great way for students to say more with less. I had my students create a three word essay about animal life cyles as a culmination to the unit. Students were instructed to take their knowledge from the unit and summarize using only three words. This was a difficult task but, with modeling by me using other subjects/topics, students were able to succeed. Students had to communicate what animal life cyles were all about using only three words. They were able to use pictures or motions to help them show their idea. Some examples students came up with were, "Animals Cycle Around," "Life Goes Around," "Egg, Tadpole, Frog," "Eggs, Larva, Insect," "Egg, Chick, Chicken," and "Life Circles Around." Students presented their "Three Word Essays" to their classmates. I think when you are forced to only use three words to tell everything you have learned makes you think and choose your words wisely. I will use the "Three Word Essay" in the future with other topics and units.
As I reflect on the conference I am questioning how I ensure that my students are reading for pleasure and critical thinking. I think at times I am overwhelemed by the demands of NCSCOS and Common Core I minimize the joy of finding the sweet spot in reading that Kelly Gallagher refers to in Readicide. While reading Deeper Reading I am stuck on the sentence "We live in a world of metaphor, and those who can appreciate it are richer for it". I love when my studnets are able to pick out figurative language out of text when we are having small group discussions. However in my inclusion classes I am still struggling with getting some of my students to see it without me pointing it out. On pg 128 in Deeper Reading Gary Soto's Oranges poem is listed with and without metaphors. Using that as a mentor text was excellent in getting my students to see how figurative language makes text come to life. So now we have been on a figurative language hunt. We bring a poem, article, rap etc. to class and share with our class the figurative language we have come to appreciate. It has been exciting to see where they find figurative language and how they enjoy sharing with everyone. Intisar
I agree completely about being able to transfer everything Kelly was sharing with us to the younger grades. I teach 3rd grade and I can't imagine how much easier it would be to teach, practice, and model starting in elementary school to help prepare them for the writing they have to do in high school. I love your idea of putting their "practice" work out in the hall because it doesn't always have to be perfect!
My PLC partner and I attended the Kelly Gallagher conference together and our 2 1/2 hour drive back home flew by...we had so much to talk about! We have taught 5-paragraph essays in the past, not because we think they are examples of fine writing, but because they are a formula to assist struggling writers who need a "crutch" to boost their confidence. The rote formula and awkward transitions between paragraphs do not help students actually become good writers, though. I gave students a mentor text to aid them with a writing assignment when I returned. The first thing I did was model an essay myself in front of the class...no rehearsing, so I could demonstrate that writing can be ugly and hard. Kelly is right - it is awkward opening ourselves up to that kind of scrutiny, but he also made me feel that it was OK to look less-than-perfect. (Who am I kidding? They never thought I was, anyway!) Kids got right to work after the modeling, and I was so pleased to see them work quickly and quietly. They never asked me how long the writing piece needed to be, and they were anxious to share their work. Initially there were some students who were uncomfortable with this method and asked about plagiarizing. We read Love That Dog last year, which was inspired by a Walter Dean Myers' poem entitled, "Love That Boy." It was easy for students to understand the difference between being inspired by an author and modeling their work while giving them credit vs. taking the credit for something that clearly is someone else's work. Initially, I was afraid they would find it confusing, but it hasn't been an issue. I will definitely continue with this method in the future, particularly with persuasive essays and opinion pieces.
I also like the idea of peer response rather than peer editing. Nominating a partner's writing is a great idea and gives quiet kids who never volunteer the encouragement to share their work. The kids who have a tendency to "take over" learn to give others a chance.
Hi Karen,
I am looking for your email so that I can correspond about your cert. It is not listed in your conf info. Please email me at lamanshi@uncc.edu
After attending the writing conference, I came back with immediate takeaways for my classroom. We were in the process of reading a poetry memoir and writing poems that were similar in format, but incorporating the Read, Analyze, Emulate format has made my students far more confident in their writing and sharing of poetry. Plus, it has given them the opportunity to see examples of figurative language and other literary devices as something that is more accessible to them. We've talked about "sneeze" writing (a GREAT visual for middle-schoolers). Overall, the day was a great experience, and I feel like I would benefit from attending again!
Hi Melissa,
I am looking for your email so that I can correspond about your cert. It is not listed in your conf info. Please email me at lamanshi@uncc.edu