Hi everyone,
I think that i finally have a poem to submit for my digital story assignment, "Where I'm From". Please take a moment to bless, press, and address it.
Where I’m From
I am from Screamin’ Wheels and family-owned corner grocery stores
from Dixie Dairy, penny candy, homemade fries and sweet rolls.
I am from that large house and the end of the block
with its fenced- in backyard dripping over with fruit laced tree-tops.
I am from the aloe-vera plant, the sun flower and large oak trees
from the tall hedges that flowered lavender gardenias with large green leaves.
I am from pokeno, spades, and bingo our family played weekly
from Henry & Ruth, Losenia & Willie, and the incredible Earthie Lee.
I am from the Soul Train line, we danced at family get-togethers and BBQ’s
from “going to seeing a man about a dog”, “MYOB” and “dry yo’ eyes fool”
from the Baptist church, the catholic church, and the sanctified.
I am from the Muddy Mississippi; Prattville, Alabama, and St. Louis, Missouri all rolled into one
from fried catfish, spaghetti, and sweet potato pies heavily laden with nutmeg and cinnamon.
I am from the uncle who went away to “Nam”, returned home and created alarm.
From that very uncle who had the roar of a lion and the heart of a lamb
who made sure all of his children, nieces, and nephews would never be hurt or harmed.
I am from the large foot locker that has moved from place to place
filled with old pictures, important papers, mementos and priceless keepsakes.

Comments
Great job with the Where I'm From form. I've tried it multiple times when I write with my students and have never been truly pleased with the results. Here you manage to use specificity as well as being universal. I especially like the line about sweet potatoes, yummy! I am still curious about your uncle who served in Vietnam. I feel there's a longer story here. Keep writing!
Oh I am liking this. I particularly like the way you described and honored your uncle. Thank you for sharing your work.
I could connect with you and your uncle. I too had a special protective uncle. My husband and I also have a very special trunk he has had since college. It contains a little bit of everything special to us. I really enjoyed your poem. You wrote in a way I was able to create a visual of your life. Great!
That was very enjoyable. It left me wanting more. I liked your use of words, as they strewned together by the passion in your voice. Keep doin' it! I especially liked how you created images of the South in my head that whimsically, took me there. Very Good!
I love the name Earthie Lee. The flowers and food and church references remind me of my family. Actually, I think we'd get along just fine, your family and mine. My dad was in Viet Nam and came back a bit changed. Keep working on refining the images here, maybe even choose less images but describe more. Thanks for the good read.